Final Paper

Well tonight I finished up my paper. I added some pictures, but was never able to get those opinions for the guys that I really wanted. I thought that my paper turned out pretty good.

Rough Draft

Since last class I have put together a small works cited page of the sources that I have used. I have only used one source that I found other than the ones that I used for the tenative and annotated bib. I still have not recieved email replies from three sports writers asking there take on instant replay in sports, and it does not look like I will be recieving one anytime soon. This weekend I will be finalizing my paper.

Paper

Well tonight I was close to finishing my rought draft of my research paper. I still have to rearange everything and need to add a conclusion, pictures, and a works citied page. I would also still like to add some quotes from some knowledgable people. I am still waiting for some responses to an email that I sent out awhile ago, but am not realizing that I probably will not get one.

Researched Paper

Well today I did the most work that I have done with my paper so far. First I went over my sources again and highlighted some main points. From there I made a more in-depth outline. Tonight I mainly worked on typing my paper. So far I have completed three pages. I just mainly typed a skeleton and plan to go back and add a lot more to what I have. Tomorrow I feel like I should be able to go through and finish the main points on my outline, and then be able to go back and put in some detail. Later this week I plan to look for some pictures or diagrams that will provide knowlegde or an example to what I am talking about in some of my points that I made in my paper.